Monthly Archives: May 2013

Editing Jose’s voyage aboard the Uranie

Jose and Rose at Shark Bay in 1818

My editor and I are nearing the end of our voyage together on the Uranie. There have been smooth patches and rough ones, plain sailing and complex manoeuvres – as there are in any voyage, especially on a sailing ship in the early eighteen hundreds. But it has been an exciting ride – oops, my editor says I use ‘exciting’ (and excited) far too often. Although twenty nine times in a manuscript of forty thousand words doesn’t seem a lot to me, when it happens twice on one page I get the message. I do six or seven drafts of a manuscript before I let anyone else read it, but I am immersed in the story. Sometimes I don’t notice those surface features that are so important to the reader. Things that make perfect sense to me can be obscure, even confusing, to someone reading the story for the first time.

Good editors are worth their weight in gold. They bring different skills to the reading task and a fresh perspective to the writing. They force me to rethink and rewrite passages, to add details or leave out what is unnecessary. They have a heightened sense of the reader that balances my passion as a writer. Of course there are some compromises to be made, but I will only make them if the editor can convince me that they will strengthen the story.

Having said all that, after working away on my own for so long during the development stage, I do enjoy the stimulation, the soul searching, the cut and thrust of working with my editor.

Miss Llewellyn-Jones on high rotation

This is NOT Andrew and his daughters. But the book is the same and the kids are also fans of Miss Llewellyn-Jones

It is always wonderful when you get a message from someone who is actually reading one of your books. But this week I had an unusual email, passed on by my husband, Peter, from a colleague of his.

The message said that Miss Llewellyn-Jones was on high rotation from the library because his two daughters absolutely loved it and demanded he read it to them every night at bedtime. It was only when the girls, aged 4 years and 2.5 years insisted that their Dad read the entire book from cover to cover that he realised Elaine Forrestal must be the wife of whom Peter had spoken when they last met about a year ago.

Who says the author is dead? Well, maybe she was but not anymore. Not for Andrew and his two girls in any case.

It’s that time of year again

This is a great time of year for young people who love to write stories. There are two major writing competitions, open to all West Australians of school age, at the moment.

The NIE Young Writers Competition has two sections, poetry and prose. Primary and Secondary students of all ages can enter one piece of work in each section. Two panels of judges, one primary and one secondary, read all the entries. Then they meet to discuss and agree on the top ten pieces of work in each age group.

The Tim Winton Awards, run by the Subiaco Library, accept only prose entries, but they have expanded the competition, in the last few years, to include country students. This competition is also open to students of all ages and is judged by a panel of experienced people. Tim Winton is the patron and has presented the prizes at every ceremony since the inception of the competition almost twenty years ago.

Both of these writing competitions close at the end of May, so get busy and polish up those stories. Competitions like this are a great way to improve your writing and editing skills, which will come in handy in many other areas of your life. Have a go. You never know … And there is money to be won.